A Lullaby of Truth
A woman lulls her newborn, illegitimate child to sleep. Once he is calmly dreaming, she reflects upon the man who fathered the child, but left her without knowing of the conception of his bastard son. Finally, as she looks upon her son, the lonely mother admits her fears of what he may become as he grows, and her still greater fear of being left by him as she was left by his father before him.
This poem is a villanelle and would be used as the “lost” poem for the month of September because I think that it suits the bitter-sweet change of seansons from Summer to Fall, as it has a sad reminiscence that matches the time of year and marks the end of an often happier time. The strength the narrator displays, despite the loss of her love and her son’s loss of a father further explores the various ways in which people deal with loss. It uses literary devices such as personification, assonance, alliteration, and hyperboles.
Now sleep in peace, and not ‘till morn awake
And let no light invade these precious eyes.
Yes, sleep, my love, my beautiful mistake.
Meer hours now, until the dawn will break
And cruel Sun’s bright light will split the pensive sky.
So sleep in peace, and not ‘till morn awake.
Gone to a place where nothing is at stake,
That all the laws of life and reality defy.
Sleep on, my love, my beautiful mistake.
He stole my all, there’s nothing left to take.
Yes, thieving thoughts schemed with grinning lies.
Yet, he sleeps in peace, and not ‘till morn awakes.
Alone again, I feel the familiar ache
As, like every other night, a little dies.
But sleep, my love, my beautiful mistake.
I look upon you and full of fear I quake,
For I know you may become what I despise.
But sleep in peace, and not ‘till morn awake.
Yes, sleep, my love, my beautiful mistake.
- Rachel Harrison
- Rachel Harrison
Rachel, that was GREAT! And I remember you showed me this in math, and I was pretty caught off guard because I thought what you were about to hand to me was going to be, you know, light-hearted, funny, and not serious and miserable. I found it really amazing that you could illustrate two characters (the mother and the "father") so vividly within a short villanelle. The mother is regretful, scared, but yet thankful for what created the regret and the fear in the first place. I think this woman is pretty strong-willed and Joan-of-Arc-like to look at the outcome of the most careless error of her life and still have the positivity to call it her "beautiful mistake".
ReplyDeleteThis is quite a nice poem with lots of interesting personification. I especially like "thieving thoughts" and "grinning lies". I found it very interesting that you would pick something as complicated as a villanelle, but you did a fantastic job! Very good work!
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